Un-Heard of Riches

For The Sunday Whirl poetry prompt: Wordle #179
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live, give, heart, gold, expression, searching,
old, ocean, mind, keep, miner, crossed

And for Poets United: Poetry Pantry # 219
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Un-Heard of Riches   

In my old age am aware of living,
of giving away an ocean of expression.
Have criss-crossed both heart and mind
searching for gold buried in deepest ocean
of memories.

And like a miner, prospector of long ago,
have withheld a few of those precious nuggets.
Keeping them for self. Believing them to be
most prized and personal of possessions.

Elizabeth Crawford  9/21/14

Notes: This one was difficult. As soon as I saw the list, I immediately began to hear the song in my head and it refused to be banished no matter how I tried. Almost gave up, but finally found a way around the song, almost. Image is a photo of a backyard bon-fire put through the kaleidoscope app.

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23 Responses to Un-Heard of Riches

  1. Yes, memories are golden. Especially shiny when we polish them so frequently.

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  2. C.C. says:

    I really enjoyed your take on the wordle prompt…..especially the idea of some memories being such precious gold that we keep them for ourselves. Treasures.

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  3. drpkp says:

    Yes, similar reaction as C.C. the notion of memories kept for themselves as precious treasures is lovely

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  4. deepest oceans of memory… lovely treasures indeed.

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  5. I think we’re on the same wavelength here, Elizabeth. I like your poem very much.

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  6. Sancho Panza says:

    So many words, so few lines!

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  7. vandana says:

    memories are forever to cherish

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  8. jae rose says:

    I think we need to keep some precious nuggets for ourselves…reads beautifully and is definitely melodic…as many of your wonderful poems are..

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  9. alan1704 says:

    Powerful and beautiful

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  10. I like the picture you used. The poem I found kind of depressing on a personal level because of the ‘old age’ thing, since I’ve got one of those of my own going on, scheduled to get one year worse on my upcoming birthday….
    But I like the images in the poem, they work well for me. Good job.

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  11. oldegg says:

    Memories are precious; they are like little poems of love written in your heart.

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  12. Sumana Roy says:

    love this precious moment when we become aware of our riches and want to treasure them…beautiful lines…

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  13. Mary says:

    Elizabeth, I think that – though we give much away – we must remember to keep certain things we treasure for ourselves. Memories are golden!

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  14. Saving a few precious nuggets for oneself is a good idea. Love your bonfire kaleidoscopic image too, Elizabeth.

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  15. I like those secret memories we keep as nuggets for ourselves.. just hope it’s not the one that will hurt us or others.. so hard to judge..

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  16. Miss Stacy says:

    this poem reminds me of one who has grown wiser and reassessing some important things. i enjoy the lesson here.

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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  17. humbird says:

    To be able to save some nuggets for yourself – a huge! Self love – very important on the way to serve the others. Love what you did with fire picture – magical inspiring mandala. xx

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  18. scotthastiepoet says:

    Great and thoughtful blend achieved here, Elizabeth… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com

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  19. G L Meisner says:

    Those are the best kind of gold to find.

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  20. seasideauthor says:

    Memories are all we have of some wonderful people that have passed through our lives.

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  21. Cathy says:

    Ah memories, the are golden but you have go through the bad to get to them,.

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  22. good for you Elizabeth. I hope when I grow up I’ll have lots and lots of golden memories that will make me happy in my old age. 🙂

    James, who says I’ve grown up? Old yes, but up implies limitless potential and I’m far from achieving that yet and hope that is how it will always be,

    Elizabeth

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  23. veronicabalfourpaul says:

    Yes, this feels very reflective. There is a journey through our lives to who/what we are now. The nuggets could be the moments of clarity?

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