For The Sunday Whirl poetry prompt: Wordle # 167
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approach, key, each, grain, single, scratch,
phase, player, present, glint, level, attach
Way of The Wordle
Perhaps a good approach is to choose
one single word as the key. Attach it
to another, allowing each equal
glints of sunshine. Don’t let either
get scratched out in the process.
Every syllable should add grain to
the whole of final presentation,
bringing it one step closer to level
of almost perfection. Warning here:
at this phase it is easy for poet-player
to pull up, stop, maybe never finish.
Elizabeth Crawford 6/29/14
Poets can make their own rules and leave a thought in the reader’s imagination.
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BRILLIANT!
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Like building up layers of a painting..cleverly pulled together Elizabeth! Now I know how 😉
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I like the warning. 🙂
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The ideas from the wordle come in different way…but that is certainly a good one.
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What a great, original piece. Love the, what seemed to me, “recipe” style of the poem and especially the warning which makes me want to stop writing this reply mid-stre….
(I agree wholeheartedly with http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com's statement of BRILLIANT!)
Randy
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So…is this poem finished or not? 😉
Seeking One Ripe Plum
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I totally love this one. Clever!
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I know the feeling – I’m master of the unfinished masterpiece!
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Yes, there is the danger of not finishing. I like the idea of giving two words equal status as you begin.
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Yes, I agree with Sherry. Not finishing is an ever present danger. I like this lots!
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This is such a clever take on the words! Very cool.
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Oooh! Enjoyed this!
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Ah, so witty use of words!
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So true, so true. Sometimes it is hard stop with the Wordle poem.
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This is very clever, Elizabeth!
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Yes, I agree, Elizabeth, this is quite good.
Love,
Pamela ox
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I like your fresh take and it certainly caused me to a take a second look
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What a cool approach to the wordle! Brilliant write!
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