For The Sunday Whirl: Wordle #164
muffled, sizzle, back, language, numbers, single,
right, power, existence, stomping, hello, place
When Wordle Words Won’t Work
List of words was singularly simple.
Said hello and sat back to wait
for sizzle of power that happens
when they find their rightful place.
Watched numbers on clock
slip from existence, nothing.
Twisted language into pleading,
even prayer, got only silence.
Except for muffled stomping,
like herd of buffalo receding
into far horizon, never
Elizabeth Crawford 6/8/2014
Ooh, I have exoerienced wordles like that. Brilliant.
Those words are really recalcitrant sometimes aren’t they? However undaunted (or was your daunt put on?) the picture you painted was fine. I too have noticed that stomping feet and even growling doesn’t work…juggling however does!
“the muffled stomping” and the words – now as a herd of receding buffalo – wow this one in its etiology of frustration is truly brilliant
Yup, that sounds horribly familiar… *smile* Wonderful use of the words!
Great anti-poem. It worked well and brought a smile to my face. I loved the last stanza.
I was trying it think if the right word – anti poem is perfect..out of the block something perfect came across the plain
Word list are only co-operative when they want to be.
I like how you wrangled them in! Short and sweet.
It happens….but you used them, even though you thought you couldn’t.
Ha! I love this, Elizabeth. Nice how you managed to use them all.
And that is just how the wordle words, while not working, work perfectly!! hee hee. Love the buffalo, especially.
I think you did a great job with this group!
Well done! You wordled most magnificently! 😀
In spite of their reluctance, you wrangled these words into poem. Brava!