In The Gap

For 1sojournal NaPoWriMo Prompt #5: Day 5

Standing In The Gap

In The Gap

Stands in gap between fantasy
and dream. Tilts head but
gets only side glance.

Dares to draw nearer, to narrow
space and distance, where concept
of dream soon grows clearer.

Not just another mirror image,
but beginning to pulse with life,
rife with the love for becoming.

Elizabeth Crawford  4/5/14


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3 Responses to In The Gap

  1. Beautiful…”rife with the love for becoming.”

    Thank you Sherry, I love that line as well.



  2. I was going for the same bit as Sherry. I LOVE it. So beautiful, Elizabeth!

    And I loved your road trip with V,



  3. Pamela says:

    Yup, the last stanza is awesome, Elizabeth. Beautiful piece of writing.



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