For The Sunday Whirl: Wordle #153
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sting, grind, natural, addition, plenty, warning,
rival, course, quartet, broken, response, blunt
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Please watch video before reading.
Crystallized Moment
Without warning, she appears to dance
through natural crystalline caves of ice,
seemingly unaware of the sting of winter,
it’s blunt chill broken by her pixie-like antics.
In response, frozen walls seem to bend,
extend themselves to embrace her music.
No rival, violin adds voice to grinding stillness,
becoming both magician and creator.
Elizabeth Crawford 3/23/14
Notes: The wordlist had me stumped to the point that I thought I would probably pass on writing anything this week. But, my youngest daughter had posted on Facebook about how this particular musician had allowed her to find comfort from a long week of stress and discomfort. As I listened and watched the video, some of the words on the list began to dance and play. Only used half of them, but that’s better than nothing, or grinding silence.
Used the title of the song to reflex on the title here because the song actually crystallized the words for me. Musician is Lindsey Stirling. You can find more information about her here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lindsey_Stirling
having just watched frozen (twice) in the last 24 hours…it made me think of that…
but i love the sound of the violin…so i can def believe it as magician and creator
glad your youngest daughter found that relief…
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amazing vid of lindsey as well…
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That was quite a task. I could only write to my own words. You even added some difficult ones.
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oh wow… very cool… she’s a piece of music herself – love the passion she puts into her play
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Honestly this word list was not even noticable in your lines… such a good take… hmm.. I might give it a go too if I have the time..
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It is a delight to see musicians come out with their music and entrance you with movement and feeling as well. You words complemented the video so well.
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Grinding silence is a poem in itself Elizabeth..she is certainly pixie like..adventurous..exploring..funny how we find things to inspire us..when things seem grinding and silent..happy Sunday to you 🙂
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Delightful – ie full of delights, melody, dance, poetry. What more could I ask.
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What a wonderful video. Loved the setting. Those caves of ice were spectacular and the music magical. Your poem worked with the crystalline ice well. You were a magician and creator with your words.
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you’ve captivated her spirit with the given words…truly amazing….
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I’ve never been to an ice cave, but I love to think about them. A very beautiful piece of writing. I’ve given up on using all the words…I seem to be rebelling…just some….
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Nice. The video is fascinating. The wordle…totally disappeared.
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“Both magician and creator”. This line could easily apply to you and this poem! Kudos!!! (I had to read for the prompt the wordle words truly melted –
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hmm…violin’s voice… beautiful.
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Half is lots better than nothing! You’ve done wonders with the words!
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Beautiful music and your words complement the video in a wonderful manner.
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I love how the frozen walls seem to bend to embrace her music. A lovely image.
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Lovely Elizabeth… I enjoyed the following two lines especially:
“it’s blunt chill broken by her pixie-like antics” AND “No rival, violin adds voice to grinding stillness,”
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Love it, both of them. Thanks for posting the video, will be adding her to my music collection.
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How lovely that your daughter inspired this wonderful poem!
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This has marvelous energy!
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Your writing fits perfectly with the video. Really very nice, Elizabeth.
Love,
Pamela
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You create a warmth within the cold imagery. Very well done.
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Your words fit the video so well. Thank you for sharing.
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“the crystallized” moment lingers …
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