Cloud Shadow

For The Sunday Whirl writing prompt: Wordle #120
http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/

words are: gravity, plans, thread, landscape, salt, breath, shadow, shoes, bread, senses, sends, head

cloud shadow

image from the internet

Cloud Shadow

Like a cloud shadow defying gravity,
soul drifts slowly across inner landscape.
Sometimes bending to caress bowed head
or breathing bubbles of joy into bloodstream.

Never leaving shoe prints, only occasional
bread crumbs to capture attention, she threads
careful way into all human senses, sending
wind-whispered messages, while constantly

salting plans with grams of truth.

Elizabeth Crawford  8/4/13

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18 Responses to Cloud Shadow

  1. Stan Ski says:

    Love that seasoning at the end…

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  2. Irene says:

    Yea, me too.

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  3. Ramesh Sood says:

    Salting plans with grams of truth..what a culmination of a well woven poem…Well done..
    My wordle here..
    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/in-vast-landscape-of-myth.html
    RS

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  4. annell says:

    This is very beautiful!

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  5. drpkp says:

    I love “wind-whispered messages” … ahhhh …

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  6. wind whispered messages will come with me, thank you for this.

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  7. brenda w says:

    …salting plans with grams of truth.
    We all need a bit of that salt. The image itself is stunning, Elizabeth. A good find. Your first line is enticing, and the piece carries a soothing softness.

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  8. Yes, salting plans with grams of truth… Great images. Good wordle

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  9. Mary says:

    Beautifully stated, Elizabeth. I like the idea of the soul drifting across the inner landscape. That resonates with me. As does salting with grams of truth.

    Speaking of truth, I would appreciate your perspective on the poem I shared today in Pantry! You will know the characters.

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  10. WabiSabi says:

    Reading this was like floating , with your words, on a cloud, gently listening to the wisdom of the wind! Lovely!

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  11. Mishla says:

    lovely – our inner spirit taking care of us gently ever so gently with truth.

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  12. kaykuala says:

    Sometimes bending to caress bowed head
    or breathing bubbles of joy into bloodstream.

    Such a wonderful way of getting it across. Great imagery! It makes nice reading, Liz!

    Hank

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  13. oldegg says:

    Cloud shadows are like little reminders that we are not in control of our lives but higher beings giving us a nudge now and then. Your words put it more beautifully.

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  14. Pamela says:

    A beautiful and spiritual write, Elizabeth. Very nicely done.

    Pamela

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  15. You are a soulful writer…

    existentialism

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  16. Cathy says:

    Excellent, would never thought to use a cloud for this wordle.

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  17. Diane Belleville says:

    Lovely journey…the land beneath the cloud looks ravaged.

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  18. GILLENA COX says:

    have to say it also, i love your wrap up line “salting plans with grams of truth”

    much love…

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