For November PAD Challenge: Image #24
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Diverse voices raised
to swelling
crescendo.
Golden sunset
sparkling cool
lake water.
Mother with sleeping
child on front
porch rocker.
Elizabeth Crawford 11/24/12
For November PAD Challenge: Image #24
http://1sojournal.wordpress.com/
Diverse voices raised
to swelling
crescendo.
Golden sunset
sparkling cool
lake water.
Mother with sleeping
child on front
porch rocker.
Elizabeth Crawford 11/24/12
Beautifully peaceful, such a tender scene.
Sometimes I prefer these short verses, Sherry. Thanks for commenting,
Elizabeth
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The second stanza is gorgeous. Love it.
Gotta confess, that’s my favorite as well. Glad you enjoyed,
Elizabeth
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I tried to be simple like your piece and the pi ku is. But I end up stretching like a cat, reaching so I ended up with this:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/11/images-24-to-join-together.html
Thanks Jules, I have a tendency toward simple until it gets complicated, then all bets are off,
Elizabeth
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I like how you begin with diverse and end with a universal image of mother rocking sleeping child. There’s harmony!
Secret? I’m always just a bit surprised when those things happen. My subconscious works well without my interference, lol. Thanks for noticing,
Elizabeth
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