Startled Moment









For Sunday Whirl Wordle #34: word puzzle

Startled Moment

Rapid pulsations of light
as rare glass is released
from spasm’s grip. Contents
become weightless enigma
racing toward spacious
concrete flooring in liquid
elements of rainbow splash.

Elizabeth Crawford  12/11/11


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8 Responses to Startled Moment

  1. Elizabeth, now, that is what I call a concise and cohesive piece of writing. Nice to see you back with us 🙂



  2. Susannah says:

    Ooh I could see it! 🙂
    Lovely use of the words Elizabeth.


  3. You always manage to come with a perfect wordle, no matter how difficult the words that are given. Yay!


  4. Sheila Moore says:

    awesome whirling delight.


  5. Traci B says:

    Very spare and effective use of the wordle – made me think of a startled woman dropping a glass of Kool-Aid (the “rainbow splash” brought it to mind). 🙂


  6. Marianne says:

    Lovely flowing piece! You have described a started moment perfectly!


  7. This complements mine perfectly…

    elemental pulsations


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