For Sunday Whirl Wordle #34: word puzzle
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Startled Moment
Rapid pulsations of light
as rare glass is released
from spasm’s grip. Contents
become weightless enigma
racing toward spacious
concrete flooring in liquid
elements of rainbow splash.
Elizabeth Crawford 12/11/11
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Elizabeth, now, that is what I call a concise and cohesive piece of writing. Nice to see you back with us
Pamela
Ooh I could see it!
Lovely use of the words Elizabeth.
You always manage to come with a perfect wordle, no matter how difficult the words that are given. Yay!
awesome whirling delight.
Very spare and effective use of the wordle – made me think of a startled woman dropping a glass of Kool-Aid (the “rainbow splash” brought it to mind).
Lovely flowing piece! You have described a started moment perfectly!
Truly concise.
This complements mine perfectly…
elemental pulsations